Re: The Test of Ranks private [Jasui Chitaiga vs. Shakiiru Miroki / No Killing]

by **Sorrow** on Sun 07 Feb 2010, 3:26 am

OOC: The jutsu said a sprinkler affect meaning that it is sprinkled from above, your jutsu is worded incorrectly if it was supposed to be coming from below me. I don't believe I should change it due to the jutsu description.

by [HB] Jastrok on Sun 07 Feb 2010, 3:59 am

OOC:

It flows from your feat, and under the opponent, the water than shoots up at the opponent, creating a sprinkler affect

by **Sorrow** on Sun 07 Feb 2010, 7:45 am

Jastrok wrote:OOC:

It flows from your feat, and under the opponent, the water than shoots up at the opponent, creating a sprinkler affect

OOC: Yeah the acid came from below me shoots up and sprinkler affect means it then rains down at me.

by [HB] Jastrok on Sun 07 Feb 2010, 7:50 am

OOC: I will get a mod to look over this if you wish, but sprinklers are things if it comes up from the ground, your post is still flawed considering you say a cloud formed over you, it isn't that big of a deal so you should change it, it wouldn't really matter considering this isn't really an important fight.

by **..::Ivan the Viking::..** on Sun 07 Feb 2010, 8:08 am

Sorrow wrote:
Jastrok wrote:OOC:

It flows from your feat, and under the opponent, the water than shoots up at the opponent, creating a sprinkler affect

OOC: Yeah the acid came from below me shoots up and sprinkler affect means it then rains down at me.

OOC: I am not a mod but Sorrow, when a sprinkle sprinkles it comes from the ground so even if it does fall down on you it still hits you from bellow because it's coming from the ground.

by **Sorrow** on Sun 07 Feb 2010, 3:13 pm

OOC: Alright but can you clarify how high up the acid goes? Cause I know it isn't possible for it to go all the way up into the air if thats the case of how the jutsu is performed.

by [HB] Jastrok on Sun 07 Feb 2010, 6:34 pm

OOC: Well when I made the jutsu, I meant to say when it shoots up at the opponent, it goes up to there height.

by **Sorrow** on Tue 09 Feb 2010, 2:53 pm

OOC: Edited.

by [HB] Jastrok on Mon 15 Feb 2010, 1:29 am

Jasui stood there his opponent was running towards him, the acid shooting up at the opponent, though he noticed, somehow he managed to get his hand on a kunai and throw it at Jasui, he did a simple maneuver and jumped to the right, turning in his jump, and kicked off with his feet, landing on his hands, and pushed off, landing about 10 feet from his previous position, the kunai missing. The whole time he jumped, he maintained focus on the jutsu at hand, being a jounin, he spent much time to learn better focus on jutsu, he realized if he did an easy maneuver like that, he could still maintain focus with the jutsu at hand loosley, and when he was done, could continue focus fully. So at the time he landed, the jutsu was still in control, and when he landed, he focused fully, but for that time of loose focus, the jutsu's power went down slightly, the acid only able to shoot up about 3ft, though that was only for a few seconds.

After the fact, he noticed his opponent had also tried to send an attack at him, even though it missed, Jasui was valnurable, and the opponent could surely use the force of the attack into force to turn and than have enough power going to launch another attack at Jasui, so he made sure to maintain enough focus on the jutsu and his opponent, what he did, was move the center of the jutsu, to the current position of the opponent, the acid of the attack did not affect Jasui one bit, though he tried to stay clear of the acidic sprinkler, which would last only for a couple more minutes, because it would block his view of the opponent.