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 Adelbert, Bente [Wanderer]

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Bente Adelbert

PostSubject: Adelbert, Bente [Wanderer]   Sun May 04, 2014 6:23 am

Adelbert, Bente

Hello! Will you play with me!

Face Claim:
Character Face Claim:

  • Face Claim: Hiver Laurant
  • Character Origin: Sound Horizon

Basic Information
Name/Alias: Bente, Laurent, Marco, Wanderer, and Architect.
Character Name: Bente Adelbert
Character Age: Appears 16, True Age: Unknown
Character Birthday: October 5th
Character Zodiac: Virgo
Character Gender: Androgenous

Personality and Appearance
Character Appearance:

  • Hair Color: Silver
  • Eye Color: Heterochromatic: Left: Red, Right: Blue
  • Height: 5’ 7” or 67 inches
  • Weight: 145 lbs
  • Overall: Appearing at the ripe young age of sixten, Bente holds a rather neutral appearance, neither appearing fully male or fully female. While he does retain some of his more masculine traits like a strong jaw and lithe athletic build, he still has rather feminine traits like soft toned eyes, rather feminine curves and general feminine poses when not aware of how he is standing. Extremely soft spoken his voice will rarely rise above a moderate room conversation and is extremely airy. His eyes while soft often seem sharper than they truly appear sometimes even belying an air of experience than the boy himself doesn’t appear to have. He has two marks on his face underneath each eye. underneath his left eye is a crosshair encircled by a wreath of thorns, underneath the right is a bird in mid flight with the wings bordering his eye with two bright red dots for eyes.

    He generally wears comfortable clothing, usually of western make and constantly wears winter themed clothing for unknown reasons. For shoes he wears heeled snow boots that are covered in fur.

Character Personality: Generally calm and upbeat, Bente doesn’t seem like the type to hold a grudge. Normally holding a calm, rather reserved smile the boy never shows a true face of anger. When in social areas he is very chipper, often laughing and joking around with his peers, playfully innocent in a way that doesn’t seem overbearing for his apparent age. When alone and to himself, he is heavily pensive, always thinking on things with far more importance than himself. He seems to have grand schemes in mind whenever he concludes his meditation because there is always a slight twinkle to his eye that shows whenever he had solved a problem or thought of a new angle to abuse. The boy is extremely cunning to a fault and will attempt any known angle that would lead to him gaining what he needs with the least amount of work required to get it.

The Logistics
Character Nindō: Don’t worry too much, just relax...
Character Clan: N/A

  • Kekkei Genkai: N/A
  • Hījutsu: N/A

Character Affiliation: N/A

Character Rank: N/A
Character Occupation: Wanderer

Elemental Nature(s): N/A
The History
Character History: A random entity, born from coincidence that isn’t of this world. Bente is an enigma, a living objection to normal society. He neither has any given family, nor a proper place of beginning, yet he claims to have come from a side of the planet where “The sky is forever colored a rich, vibrant red from the smoke and blood that seemed to be eternally coating the ground from the endless war and suffering”. What that means, hasn’t been decided since most people can’t tell if the boy is telling the truth or not, so many simply choose to leave it be. The boy has spent most of the worlds known history of him wandering, never sticking in one place long enough for much to be written about him. He always seemed to be looking for something however in many of the accounts of him, always searching and seeking with his childlike gaze and contagious innocence. It’s unknown what will happen when he finds what he’s looking for, but considering the rather bleak picture he paints whenever asked about it, many sure hope he never does find it.

Role-play Sample: Having understood the orders given by his commanding officer he followed after the man, student not forgotten but merely not on his mind. He glanced behind himself, giving the boy a level eye, “This here will be your test, perform amicably and we will begin your actual training immediately, fail and I will have you doing remedial lessons for a good portion of the time until you are up to snuff. Understood?” He didn’t give the boy time to reply as he placed his hand on his Kage’s shoulder signifying he was going ahead before he disappeared in a burst of speed, actually using his training for once instead of taking a sedated civilian’s pace. He took a roundabout path, also using his knowledge of the surrounding terrain to his advantage as he basically parkoured his way to a proper location, which just happened to be behind the men at the gate.

Standing amongst the tree’s the made up the surrounding area’s of the gates just outside the village, he observed his targets from afar, standing at closest five meters away from one of the robed men. Honestly, what was with this ensemble, and how had any of the shinobi in the village not noticed these two just... standing there looking like Beavis and Butthead with their neon light outfits on. Shaking his head at this rampant case of incompetency he stepped out from behind his hiding spot approaching the two men in a rather nonchalant way that actually belied his actual intentions. Likely spotting the shower of kunai before the two men did he quickly drew his blade Valvrave from it’s sheath, the crimson and black saber releasing an almost unnoticeable whine as is arced through the rather chilly early morning air.

Whistling softly to himself as if to not alert the men to his presence just yet, he charged up chakra into his blade and waited a few seconds (see: 10) until the men were within a rather optimal range to use his technique. Sword glowing softly from the charge, he raised it up to around chest level before turning the blade so that it was perpendicular to the ground. Holding it back slightly as if he were going to throw the blade itself, he swung the blade quickly and quietly, the sharp edge splitting the wind around it without so much as a swish before a large arc of chakra around ten meters wide shot out of the edge of the blade suddenly in an intent to catch the men as they would likely backpedal away from the incoming rain of projectiles. Charging further chakra into his blade he continue to swing nonchalantly from his place behind the two invaders, arcs of chakra flying out as he slashed diagonally, vertically and eve in a arc in various directions using the full forward vision and motion of his body to slice through various tree’s and even the sky, cutting off any path of true escape.

Upon ending his bombard he would wait for a moment (see: five seconds) before walking up upon the devastated area. Most of the trees were relatively unharmed, rather the technique he used wasn’t meant to slice through his targets, but wear them down due to them having to dodge often enough to avoid getting hit by what they perceive to be deadly blades of chakra. But if they did get hit by them, then getting stunned as foreign chakra entered and fled your system suddenly was good enough for him honestly, it meant that they weren’t able to react in time to any of his follow up strikes, plus they would be winded since it was still technically an attack, and rule number one of combat is to not get hit, even by things that are perceived to not be dangerous.
Character Family:

  • Mother: N/A
  • Father: N/A
  • Spouse: N/A
  • Siblings: N/A
  • Children: N/A
  • Pets: N/A
  • Other: N/A

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PostSubject: Re: Adelbert, Bente [Wanderer]   Sun May 04, 2014 8:12 am

If this is done, it looks great! Only a couple small things.

Name/Alias: This section is supposed to be the name that you want others to call you around the forum. These are not character names.

As for the "Mother," "Father," "Spouse," "Siblings," etc. Please at least fill each section out with "N/A" so that it does not merely look incomplete. Thanks! Other than that, this is a great piece of work!


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Bente Adelbert

PostSubject: Re: Adelbert, Bente [Wanderer]   Sun May 04, 2014 12:28 pm

Done o.o
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PostSubject: Re: Adelbert, Bente [Wanderer]   Sun May 04, 2014 8:12 pm

Peaceful wanderer's are allowed into each village.
If they have an approved passport, and a clean record.
Don't forget to make your secondary account here.


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