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PostSubject: Soundbyte's weights   Sat Jul 06, 2013 4:05 pm

Name: Soundbyte’s Weights
Origin: A set of weights Soundbyte was given to by Soran before he died. There are two pairs of weights; one for the arms, the other for the legs.  Both pairs that go onto the arms and legs.  The arm weights appear to be little more than pitch black sweatbands that are bound to his shoulders and ankles. This is usually hidden by his pants or melody arms, but they fit perfectly without interfering with his specially made shoes or gauntlets. Can also be removed without taking the shoes or the melody arms off. The weights are extremely durable, yet oddly small in size for the amount of weight that they carry. Despite their unassuming appearance, each weight weighs 500 pounds. This would be a true test of Brandon's skills. Soran knew that what Brandon needed to increase in most was speed. This would be a difficult task for Brandon to accomplish, but he knew the outcome would be worth it.

1. 2% increase to Speed.  100 Word Count/6 PAC
2. 2% increase to Speed.  200 Word Count/7 PAC
3. 2% increase to Speed.  300 Word Count/8 PAC
4. 2% increase to Speed.  400 Word Count/9 PAC
5. 2% increase to Speed.  500 Word Count/10 PAC
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6. 1% increase to Strength and Speed.  600 Word Count/11 PAC
7. 1% increase to Strength and Speed.  700 Word Count/12 PAC
8. 1% increase to Strength and Speed.  800 Word Count/13 PAC
9. 1% increase to Strength and Speed.  900 Word Count/14 PAC
10. 1% increase to Strength and Speed. 1000 Word Count/15 PAC
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11. 1% increase to Strength and Speed.  1100 Word Count/16 PAC
12. 1% increase to Strength and Speed.  1200 Word Count/17 PAC
13. 1% increase to Strength and Speed.  1300 Word Count/18 PAC
14. 1% increase to Strength and Speed.  1400 Word Count/19 PAC
15. 1% increase to Strength and Speed.  1500 Word Count/20 PAC
C:
 

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PostSubject: Re: Soundbyte's weights   Sat Jul 06, 2013 4:54 pm

"After using the weights for so long, the user has gained a tremendous amount of speed once they are removed. Complimentary to those who use Baguazhang style of Martial Art and his natural wind affinity. As this boosts the flexibility of the user to superhuman levels after being weighed down for so long. Making the circle walking movements of “smooth coiling and uncoiling actions” seem like second nature to the individual."

I do not know if this is a secondary ability that you are adding to the 10% flexibility, but it specifically, the speed thing needs to be removed. i understand you are probably talking about what is above, but it implies added speed, so just take it out. And saying your flexibility is boosted to super human levels should be out as well. if you can, this whole paragraph and just keep the second one.

"Due to prolonged training with weights, the user has learned how to pace themselves perfectly. Combined with a user the highest level of secrete skill of shaolin traditional gongfu, Xin Yi Ba, will gain a mastery in a main series of movements and branch movements. When one can become proficient in mastering those movements, they can create infinite postures of their own. The user's flexibility increases by another 20%."

no stacking, so you can change the B or the A.

"Being under these weights so long has allowed the user time to fortify their Chakra and outer strength, the purpose is to manipulate your Chakra in order to nourish your internal organs and enrich the muscles of the body. Then one can move the Chakra out of the body as well, and the Chakra can help your body avoid being injured in some situations by performing more powerful techniques without expending so much Chakra. They will have the advantage of reacting at the last second in order to avoid an attack. The endurance of the user increases by 25%."

remove literally everything but this line: "The endurance of the user increases by 25%"

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PostSubject: Re: Soundbyte's weights   Sat Jul 06, 2013 5:12 pm

Fixed

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PostSubject: Re: Soundbyte's weights   Sat Jul 06, 2013 5:19 pm

approved for training/purchase

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