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 Kinzaburou, Takehiro

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PostSubject: Kinzaburou, Takehiro   Wed May 29, 2013 1:49 am



Basic Character Information:
Name: Kinzaburou, Takehiro
Alias / Nickname: Take
Age: 28 (3.14)
Gender: Male
Appearance: Takehiro stands five feet four inches tall and weighs eighty four pounds. He is shorter than most ninja, but this can sometimes work to his advantage. Takehiro has off-white hair, which he usually spikes up. When it's not spiked up, his hair is curled and left hanging down; quite a different look from the usual. He is light skinned and has turquoise eyes. He has a small nose and chin, and an oval-shaped head. To most people, he would look weak but his muscle definition is actually quite astounding for his age. He has a 72 inch wingspan, which is long compared to the average height-to-wingspan ratio.

He wears a black and white robe which goes up to his ankles. Instead of a black and white robe, he sometimes wears a completely black robe with a white sash around his waist. He wears white socks underneath his brown sandals. Sometimes, usually when it is a windy day, Takehiro wears a white cape over his robe. He thinks this makes him look bad-ass. Takehiro will wear the occasional flak jacket when needed. When Takehiro is going for a walk or if he wants to look good, he wears a white and black hooded sweater, a grey vest, black pants, and a brown pair of low-cut Vans. On sunny days, he will wear a pair of sunglasses that his father had given to him as a child.
Personality: When Takehiro is assigned a job, he will do it without any complaints unless the job is completely outrageously difficult. Takehiro is not the kind of person that you would try to piss off. Takehiro is rather short-tempered and can be too aggressive at times. If not enraged, Takehiro would be very calm, responsible, and laid back. Takehiro takes training very seriously, since he wants to take be ready to take on the killer of his parents. When Takehiro is enraged, he is not easily distracted. In his mind, the only thing he thinks about his is opponent and how he would like to defeat him. He feels that he must protect it. Takehiro despises killers who kill for the hell of it.

Takehiro's motives lay out plain and simple. Kill my uncle, train my fists to become durable, light, fast, strong and concussive weapons of terror, protect the innocent, and show loyalty to his village. He tries to abide by these rules at all time and never falter away. Takehiro lives in an orphanage with a few elders and doesn't really mind this. They rarely bother him and he is able to live peacefully most of the time. Takehiro's usual day is waking up early in the morning, training for an odd number of hours, resting for about one, and looking around the village for some food and for some new friends.
Your Ninja Way: "Expect the unexpected."
User ID u17610

Bloodline Information:
Bloodline Name: Hyouton | Ice Release
Kekkei Genkai | Bloodline Techniques: Shinobi with this bloodline limit are able to fuse their Water and Wind based chakra to create a new type of element: Ice. Through willpower alone, people with this bloodline can manipulate all forms of ice, making it a misnomer in a way. This means sleet, snow, ice, etc. can be manipulated and molded to the user's preference. Note that as this is a combination of two main elements, fire would not react accordingly as if it were regular ice. Water puts out fire and wind spreads it, so chakra infused ice is more resistant to fire than regular ice would be.
Origin: The origin of this bloodline dates back to before God's Finger was ever even thought of. The original wielders of the bloodline, the Yuki clan, were considered jewels in their time. The Yuki clan wasn't like other advanced element clans however, the bloodline wasn't abundant; it skipped generations randomly, which is why those who possessed it were such a rarity and so special. Most of the clan resided in Yukigakure no Sato, but those with the bloodline were often taken from their homes at a young age and brought to Kirigakure to be trained as ruthless Mist shinobi. This went on for years until one day the leader of the clan's son was taken, and that was the final straw. At this time, the God's Finger had alerady been constructed and used multiple times. The Revolt of the Yuki Clan was the name of the civil war that took place. The small, snow village based clan had no chance, but Kirigakure decided to make an example out of them, and used God's Finger, destroying the snow village. This was just the start of many civil wars that lead to the destruction of Kiri.
Approved Bloodline Application Link: http://www.narutor.org/t28913-hyouton-complete

Clan Information:
Clan Name: Senju
Clan History: WIP
Clan Application Link: http://www.narutor.org/t29461-senju-clan-wip


Role Information:
Rank: Jonin
Residency: Kitai City
Organization | Group: N/A

Skill Information:
Skill Specialty:
-Main: Kenjutsu
-Sub: Ninjutsu
-Tertiary: N/A
Elemental Affinity:
-Main: Wind
-Sub: Water
-Advanced: Ice

Special Characteristics:
Special Characteristics:
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History Information:
History: Birth and Childhood Arc: Takehiro was born to his parents Takahashi and Miziro Kinzaburou. They lived in the western part of Kitai City. When Takehiro was four, his father, Takahashi, entrusted Takehiro his sword. It was the Kinzaburou sword passed down through the ages. It had a green handle and sheath. Takehiro wondered why he received the sword so early, but he would soon find out. The next day, his home was lit on fire by a village invader. Takehiro's father was expecting him, as he lost the invader lost to him in a fight. Everyone in the house was running frantically around. His parents told Takehiro to hide in a tiny closet only he could fit into. Then, he heard the village invader come into the house with a sword. Through the blinds of the closet, he witnessed his family getting murdered by the village invader. He could only watch, or else he would die as well. After the invader left, Takehiro stepped outside and kissed his parents on the cheek, vowing to find the killer.

Academy Arc: After the Kinzaburou massacre, he was taken in by an orphanage. They promised the would take good care of him. In the first month of being in the orphanage, his uncle had come to visit. His uncle lived on the other side of the village. He just wanted to greet Takehiro and pay his condolences, but Takehiro wanted to be strong. He wanted to take down his family's killer. He asked his uncle if he was trained in the way of the sword. His uncle was trained in kenjutsu, being a Kinzaburou, and offered to help his nephew. They trained for two months until Uncle had to leave to the other side of the village. The day before Uncle's departure, Takehiro was enrolled into the Ninja Academy. He learned the basics of being a ninja, and the Academy decided his basic ninja skills and sword skills were good enough for Takehiro to become a Genin. He graduated from the Academy at the age of eight.

Genin Arc: After five years of doing community service around the village, Takehiro decided that it was time to do some real fighting. He asked the village to send him on a mission, and they told him to go hunt an animal, as that would be a real challenge for Takehiro. He couldn't take the insult and went off to find some missing-nin. He found his uncle near the shore, using his sword to impale a Kitaii shinobi through the heart. He was trying to get steal his money! Takehiro couldn't believe this, but before Takehiro could get worked up, Uncle told Takehiro that it was him who killed his parents. Uncle then knocked Takehiro out cold and dragged him back to the front of the orphanage. Takehiro woke up, still filled with rage. He realized his uncle didn't want to hurt him, but wanted Takehiro to grow stronger. This would work against him as Takehiro focused all his time into training to kill Uncle.

Chuunin Arc: Due to Takehiro's intense training regimen for speed, strength, and overall ninja skills, the city believed that this ninja had to be elevated. He had to be a chuunin. Takehiro was the obvious ninja to choose to become chuunin. He had developed too fast for his age. However, when Takehiro met his other peers, he found that he was weaker than most. He wasn't the top of his class. Takehiro had become an average ninja. Takehiro took note of this and trained even harder. He increased his swing speed and strength, he made his lower body stronger to withstand strong blows, he did plyometrics to increase his natural foot speed and jump height to conserve chakra, and he reinforced his Hisui Hakaimono with pure steel around its edges so it would have a greater cutting power combined with his wind affinity. The city noticed this and became interested in his development speed. So they held an exhibition match between Takehiro and the strongest of the chuunins, Raizu. Raizu was a taijutsu user adept at using the Eight Gates. Takehiro beating him would certainly be a feat. Although Takehiro was the underdog in the match, he pulled away due to his superb kenjutsu style and quick thinking. Takehiro was placed on a specialist team comprised of bukijutsu users, and the team was used for ambush and small, team-based missions. The squad was especially successful and all of the team members were promoted to jonin level.

Jonin Arc: A few years after Takehiro's promotion to a jonin, he was notified that his ancestors were of the Senju bloodline. Takehiro brushed it off as blasphemy at first, so the Senju leader personally visited the kenjutsu specialist and told him about how the Senju clan broke apart and how the Kinzaburou family derived from them. The Uchiha clan was a corrupt one and the Senju needed to bring them down. Takehiro, although confused, believed the clan leader and accepted his invitation to become a part of the clan. Takehiro shared similar beliefs to Senju chief and saw it as a great opportunity to fight for what he believed in.



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PostSubject: Re: Kinzaburou, Takehiro   Wed May 29, 2013 10:41 pm

Before i even look at the history i only have a few things

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Name: Shōkan no Makimono [Scroll of Summoning]
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Rank: D
Range: 5 ft
Height - 1 ft 4 in
Diameter - 2.5 in
Unrolled Length - 30 ft
Description: This scroll holds all of the seals that contain weapons from another location. By using this scroll, the user is able to gather as many weapons that are sealed in the scroll or as many weapons that their chakra will allow them to summon in order to fight in combat. By placing a hand on the seal, a small white explosion of white smoke will burst to reveal the weapon. Summoning each weapon costs an E rank amount of chakra, unless a the user is using a jutsu (i.e. Rising Twin Dragons), in which case the chakra cost would be the same as the jutsu's chakra cost. What is more, the E rank amount of chakra only applies for basic weapons such as kunai, shuriken, senbon, etc. Other, larger or custom weapons cost the chakra of two ranks down, with a minimum of E rank chakra. This means that the summoning of an S rank weapon from the scroll would use B rank chakra. After the topic is over in which the user summoned their weapons, all of the weapons that were summoned out of the scroll are available to be summoned in the next topic; obviously unless the user lost a custom weapon through it being stolen - weapons will not regenerate other than your basic weapons and stock weapons.

If i am wrong another mod can correct me this is Summoning so either pick summoning or take this out

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Name: Fuujin - Dust Cloud
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Range: 10 meters
Clan: --
Description: After formation of the needed hand seals, the user will expel a large torrent of cutting ash from their mouths. This ash can blind and cause lacerations to the target.

This is vague as hell explain what the ash is made out of,Why it cuts them, How much damage it does.

Fix this and we can look again





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PostSubject: Re: Kinzaburou, Takehiro   Wed May 29, 2013 11:01 pm

Removed the two jutsus, added this:

Name: Mizuame Nabara - Starch Syrup Capture Field
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 10 meters in each direction
Element: Suiton
Description: Suiton Mizuame Nabara is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, Izumo will expel a sticky liquid from his gullet. This liquid can cover approximately 20 square meters. If the target runs on top of the liquid, their feet will become glued to its sticky surface. If the ninja focuses chakra to their feet before touching the surface, they can hover above and move over it without hindrance. This allows Izumo or a comrade to charge and attack without fear of becoming bogged down as well.

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PostSubject: Re: Kinzaburou, Takehiro   Wed May 29, 2013 11:28 pm

[quote="Yuudai Uchiha"]Before i even look at the history i only have a few things

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Name: Shōkan no Makimono [Scroll of Summoning]
Appearance:
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Rank: D
Range: 5 ft
Height - 1 ft 4 in
Diameter - 2.5 in
Unrolled Length - 30 ft
Description: This scroll holds all of the seals that contain weapons from another location. By using this scroll, the user is able to gather as many weapons that are sealed in the scroll or as many weapons that their chakra will allow them to summon in order to fight in combat. By placing a hand on the seal, a small white explosion of white smoke will burst to reveal the weapon. Summoning each weapon costs an E rank amount of chakra, unless a the user is using a jutsu (i.e. Rising Twin Dragons), in which case the chakra cost would be the same as the jutsu's chakra cost. What is more, the E rank amount of chakra only applies for basic weapons such as kunai, shuriken, senbon, etc. Other, larger or custom weapons cost the chakra of two ranks down, with a minimum of E rank chakra. This means that the summoning of an S rank weapon from the scroll would use B rank chakra. After the topic is over in which the user summoned their weapons, all of the weapons that were summoned out of the scroll are available to be summoned in the next topic; obviously unless the user lost a custom weapon through it being stolen - weapons will not regenerate other than your basic weapons and stock weapons.


Well summoning is not a specialty it is a part of ninjutsu and since he has weaponry he can do this jutsu. Tenten was a weaponry main not a summoner thats why she used all of the weapons. So is a jutsu like this allowed yes now is this one approvable idk i didnt read all of it so i leave that to you Yuudai

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PostSubject: Re: Kinzaburou, Takehiro   Wed May 29, 2013 11:35 pm

It was from the canon jutsus 4 months ago, so I think it should be fine. I'm not sure tho.

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PostSubject: Re: Kinzaburou, Takehiro   Wed May 29, 2013 11:46 pm

Alright Echo i was unsure if it was sub specialty or not so unless i missed something

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PostSubject: Re: Kinzaburou, Takehiro   Thu May 30, 2013 12:01 am

Added Summoning Scroll

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PostSubject: Re: Kinzaburou, Takehiro   Thu May 30, 2013 12:14 am

Yuudai Uchiha wrote:
Alright Echo i was unsure if it was sub specialty or not so unless i missed something

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PostSubject: Re: Kinzaburou, Takehiro   Sat Jun 01, 2013 6:36 pm

This is Un-Approved

Alright it seems i missed something you have 19 jutsu you are only permitted 10 please erase 9 jutsu also after that you should be set

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PostSubject: Re: Kinzaburou, Takehiro   Sat Jun 01, 2013 6:54 pm

FIXED

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PostSubject: Re: Kinzaburou, Takehiro   Sun Jun 02, 2013 1:57 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Kinzaburou, Takehiro   Sun Jun 02, 2013 4:21 pm

Un-ApprovedDue to a few points made by Echo you need to lose 1 SC and 1 jutsu

The SC because due to the summer solstice other thn blood line ones you can only have 1 C rank SC

The jutsu because you have a weapon which makes your overall total 11 so you have to lose the weapon or a jutsu.

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PostSubject: Re: Kinzaburou, Takehiro   Sun Jun 02, 2013 6:27 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Kinzaburou, Takehiro   Sun Jun 02, 2013 8:38 pm

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